What do you think of my halloween poem?

It's good. I like it. Chilling (not so much), de-frightful (most definitely). I'm can tell it took only a few minutes, but that's usually the best poems (the instant ones). Good word choices to, I liked the new ending better. It seems to fit the surroundings a little better. Your only 14? I'm 15 and I've published my poems, who knows maybe you will to!!!